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Re: Spirit Halloween animatronics-Stories and Poems
by SpunkyMonkey in Other » Fantasy


Re: Book thief .
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Re: Book thief .
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Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.1
by SilverNight in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Re: Spirit Halloween animatronics-Stories and Poems
by IcyFlame in Other » Fantasy


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  • Reviews » Other » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Spirit Halloween animatronics-Stories and Poems

    Hey! Good morning/afternoon/evening ! Let's begin, shall we? First, I was a bit confused with the stylistic choice of having the ringmaster's dialogue be bold. Doing this pulls one's eyes ...

    SpunkyMonkey
    SpunkyMonkey - 7 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Review, Literature
    Book thief .

    Hello! Quill here for a quick review! first thoughts , I don't know this book, (although this makes me want to read it) so It's hard to judge the meaning ...

    Quillfeather
    Quillfeather - 18 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Review, Literature
    Book thief .

    Hey yamatri! Good morning/afternoon/evening! First let's start with- GLOWS The sky is burnt The red stained street Snowflake of ash scorched my skin This is a lovely stanza. Starting with ...

    SpunkyMonkey
    SpunkyMonkey - 33 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.1

    Hey Omni! Reporting for reviewing duty on behalf of Team Clever Elves for this Review Day ^^ I stopped after 0.5 and I did read 0.6, though I wasn’t sure ...

    SilverNight
    SilverNight - 38 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Other » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Spirit Halloween animatronics-Stories and Poems

    Hey there vampricone, happy Review Day! I'm going to be giving a more general review for this particular post because it's so long that I don't think I can go ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 41 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    LMS VI: Silver and Silk 0.6

    Hi Omni! I don't know what of this I've already read (definitely some, probably not all) but it's Review Day and so review I shall! Sorry if I make reference ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 58 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    The Forgotten Kingdom Of Ora - Chapter 4

    Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, there is a lot to like about this chapter! I think my favorite element was your ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 60 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Among the Dragons - Chapter 4.2

    Ok I'm not going to repeat my comments about this scene in general from the last part because you don't need to hear it twice so I'm just going to ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    The Forgotten Kingdom of Ora - Chapter 3

    Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Among the Dragons - Chapter 4.1

    Happy Review Day! Sorry this has taken me so long, but if you're doing a revamp at least it can be a little while before I disappoint you again with ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    2050 by RPD (Chapters 1 + 2)

    Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...

    ShallowHouse
    ShallowHouse - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Accidental Magic: chapter 6

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! First things first, what a cliffhanger! I love how with every chapter, you continue to keep your readers on ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    It ended at Midnight -Chapter 11

    Hello, and Happy Review Day! I'm not exactly surprised at how horribly their first interaction went, but I must admit, I am disappointed in Jacks conduct here. If he's going ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Dramatic, Romantic
    I will Love You for the Rest of My Life

    This dialogue is very nicely written, many phrases sound very poetic and add a loving but also conservative aura to the text. The way they both talk in 3rd person ...

    MissSaigon
    MissSaigon - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Nassir the friendly hypno-snake

    I like The Jungle book and this fanfic is amazing! It seems like Amaya and Nassir are going to be great friends. Hopefully they’ll be alright, but who knows? This ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 2 hours ago


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