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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, Humor
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 15

    Ooh I made it in time to get this one out the green room! (or help, at least) Nit-picks: “Ah, how are you, Curi-dear?” A ridiculously smug grin appeared on ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 12 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, Humor
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 14

    Nearly there... Nit-picks: getting an attitude though Curi hadn't heard. Curi didn't hear the attitude? Then how did she know to relate it to us? Trailing her hand down the ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 25 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, General
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 13

    Just keep reviewing, just keep reviewing... Nit-picks: instead something heavy hung in the air—an unknown tension. There should either be a comma before this or just make it a whole ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 38 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, General
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 12

    Once more unto the breach... Nit-picks: Wolfeman frowned at her. "He still has his mustache. I'm surprised you'd say that." Really? He's surprised she's angry and venting her frustration? I ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 54 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, General
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 11

    Right, time to get started on review day! Nit-picks: seat at the barstool near the kitchen.Her parents missed space Ophelia smiled genuinely. How does Curi know it was genuine? ride ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure
    The Red-Headed League Part 2

    Hey there! I saw this was Sherlock fiction, so of course I had to drop by and review. So far, I'm really enjoying this. Both John and Sherlock are very ...

    Mea
    Mea - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Lyrics » Humor, General
    The Help o' your Readers

    Hi! @Danni88 here to review your cool poem! The subject of this is so true, especially on YWS. If it wasn't for me and @Elijah and @snowmonkey9, you wouldn't know ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    A Cricket Live

    Hey there, Eli here on this lovely review day to review your work! To be honest, I am no good with poetry so my complains might be just questions or ...

    Elijah
    Elijah - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Off Court - Chapter 4.2

    Hi! Danni88 here to review this chapter! Sorry if it's a bit short, I would like to get this out of the Green Room. First of all, I really like ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    windscreen wipers.

    I really enjoyed reading this and I especially like that even though it's not the longest, your word choice is pleasant to read. I read this like three times simply ...

    chaussettes
    chaussettes - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic
    Joan and James (1/3 of the First Chapter)

    Hey there, Eli here for a review on this beautiful review day for you! Your work caught my eye because famiy issues and strong female characters is a good mix ...

    Elijah
    Elijah - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense
    She

    Hello there! Firstly, as a person who also doesn't have English as their first language, I really appreciate the fact you're trying to write pieces in a language that you ...

    chaussettes
    chaussettes - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic
    The Art of the Heist

    Hey there, Eli here on this beautiful review day! This story is really making me laugh, maybe it is just the man's idiocy and how amuzing he is or just ...

    Elijah
    Elijah - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Lyrics » Humor, General
    The Help o' your Readers

    Hey there, Eli here on this wonderful review day! I saw this lovely work sitting alone and surely very lonely in the green room. I have not seen such a ...

    Elijah
    Elijah - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Runaway - Chapter Two

    Hello deliroast! I'm inky, here for a review! I'd like to start by saying you've got a solid storyline here for you, all ready for you to keep on going! ...

    scribbleinks
    scribbleinks - 4 hours ago


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