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Literary Spotlight

The Persona
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General


The Moon, The Sun and The Wings
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General


Stars
by woahhitherepal in Poetry » Dramatic


Hands
by Lake in Poetry » Literature


It Was The Color Of Your Hair
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic


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  • Poetry » General, General
    a loss

    i'm sorry Sad Panda

    soundofmind
    soundofmind - 20 minutes ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Welcome New Members! [3]

    Hi, I'm Smolginger but my friends just call me Ginger :D It's nice to meet everyone.

    Smolginger
    Smolginger - 20 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Our Society of Ridicule

    I LOVE THIS It's so horribly true, and I'm so sick of the ridicule and hate consuming everyone. You make mention of some valid points in here, which I really ...

    rosette
    rosette - 56 minutes ago

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction
    The Grateful Immigrant ​approx 2,300 words

    An Indian Immigrant tries to show his appreciation for having been allowed to prosper in the United States.

    Radrook
    Radrook - 1 hour ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Short Story » Culture, Dramatic
    Thousand Yard Stare

    Verry interesting I'd love to see where it would go if you were to continue it. Might want to come up with a good hook at the beginning before the ...

    camusic
    camusic - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Sync

    Hi EKK15! This is an interesting poem you have brought to us. I like the whole idea of sync, and how it is compared to a dance. I interpreted it ...

    rosette
    rosette - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 11.2

    Yo! I'm on a slight break from actual schoolwork this weekend (no drawings, just a concept model heck yea), so here I am to actually catch up on reviews! Technical ...

    Ventomology
    Ventomology - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Mighty Metro Monitors DT

    @Tortwag, I'm going to introduce him in the first post of the second arc. Or if you want, you can write a short intro post for him. If you want ...

    ajruby12
    ajruby12 - 2 hours ago

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror
    ​Mad Miser McCray

    A glimpse into madness

    Radrook
    Radrook - 2 hours ago
    18+ Language Violence Mature Content

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Stars

    Hi, I think this poem is definitely effective at portraying the emotion. However, I do think you have a lot you could work with. But this is definitely a solid ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 3 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Outliers [DT]

    I mean plot direction. Remembering our characters will be a lot easier if we had some conflict or something that would push the plot forward! ^^

    Omnom
    Omnom - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    writers' block

    Hey Saruka! Here as requested. I'll try to give good feedback, but if I repeat anything previously stated in another review, apologies (as I'm not trying to). Anyway, let's get ...

    neptune
    neptune - 4 hours ago

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical
    All my different ways

    Just a poem about someone who struggles with expressing themself. This is a bit longer than the poems that I usually write, so be prepared.

    KaiRyu
    KaiRyu - 4 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Shattered Moons

    They climbed a crumbled wall section of an old house. It seemed like they were eventually reaching smaller, more residential buildings. Rioghail --Rio now-- lit her sword with a small ...

    Omnom
    Omnom - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Review, Narrative
    Rain

    Wow this is amazing. You have a great sense of rhythm and I think I could actually see this as a song I would put on my playlist. You actually ...

    emolemon
    emolemon - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    ​I want to be a Christian

    I am a Christian myself, and a college student. So, the struggle is all too real to me. I sin, I mess up and screw up what being a Christian ...

    CateRose17
    CateRose17 - 4 hours ago


What a piece of work is a man! How noble in reason, how infinite in faculty, in form and moving how express and admirable, in action how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god -- the beauty of the world, the paragon of animals!
— William Shakespeare