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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Illusion of Creation: Chapter 2

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely review day. :) Overall, this is really interesting! One of the things that really grabbed me was ...

    Mea
    Mea - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Moonlight: Chapter Four

    Hi! So I'm not sure how much time I have today but I wanted to leave you at least one review before my friends get here :) Specifics 1. Now ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 10 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 18.3

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. I never disliked Jonathon, but I think this chapter is the one that made me finally fall in love ...

    Saen
    Saen - 13 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 18.2

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Well, shoot. I was expecting Karikoff to go off and do something stupid after that woman was killed, but ...

    Saen
    Saen - 20 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Fall on deaf ears

    Hi! I thought I'd have a look at this one too :) Line-by-line 1. Cute rhyming scheme - I especially like the half rhyme on the second line. 2. The ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 25 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Chapter 17.2: Gael

    Hey Light! Back again. This is another great chapter. Both Gael and Veris' dialogue feels natural and in-character. I'm still slightly suspicious of Veris, but a lot less than I ...

    Mea
    Mea - 31 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 18.1 (Borders)

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. This chapter was really good. I'm not sure why I haven't realized it earlier, but some of the best ...

    Saen
    Saen - 32 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.2

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. "Edna. Seriously. You don't have to be all right all the time." She hiccuped and laughed and started crying ...

    Saen
    Saen - 47 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    The unstoppable cart

    Hi again! I have some time now so I thought I'd review a few of your poems :) Line-by-line 1. The line break is a little awkward between the first ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 48 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.1

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Though I may say that I hate when characters lose their memories, I absolutely love when they're trying to ...

    Saen
    Saen - 55 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 34.2

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Your grammar was perfect in this chapter, so I'll focus on the other parts of it. The characters were ...

    Saen
    Saen - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Love Is Another Lie

    Hi, that was a really nice one. I doted how it is so short but contains such a deep denotement. This poem of yours describes a person who does not ...

    vagrant
    vagrant - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 32.1

    Hiya, Querencia! I'll be glad to be up to date with this again. A little ways into his lunch period, where he sat picking at his bland food What kind ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic
    drug drama test intro

    Hi there! Bookish here with a quick review. Firstly, due to the subject matter I would have thought that perhaps an 18+ warning would have been more appropriate due to ...

    BookishBrook
    BookishBrook - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 31.2

    Hi, Querencia. Popping in for another review. Finnley remembered that he was about to laugh at her for listening to the radio Why? It's not that uncommon. Does he think ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago


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