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  • I don't really do planmo but I thought elevator pitches sounded interesting so i thought I'd give this a shot.

    Elevator Pitch: The Finders

    Two elves, who don't conform to their roles in society, go out looking for adventure. On their way they get lost a few times and get caught in a few scrapes, but through it they discover healthier coping mechanisms. They realize that they can change things, if only through a growth mindset and determination, and they go for it- in their own strange little elfman ways.

    Liminality Nice! I like how you described the story here, it's very concise and gives the essence of the story. I'm guessing it's mainly a character-driven plot? What sort of "scrapes" do the elves get into? And what is it they are trying to change?
    Oct 21, 2021

    KateHardy Hmm...well I've read the first bits of it, but hmm this does seem like a slightly slower paced plot without a sort of main antagonist but rather a journey for the characters themselves. It sounds like it could be interesting and having read the start, I know its interesting :D
    Oct 24, 2021

    IcyFlame I agree with both the above, this is a very softly described plot. It's interesting, but maybe you could try an additional pitch - what are the stakes, why are they doing what they're doing?
    Oct 27, 2021

Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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