Young Writers Society

I just wrote this for writer's craft. It's a first draft. Critiques are welcomed and needed! The silence filled our ears with such great force that it was hard to ...

Chapter One Kaerak pulled her tattered cloak tighter as the wind howled in the valley. With her she carried the dead corpse of a rabbit and a lean mahogany bow. ...

(I have this posted elsewhere but I wrote this up through speed writing. Edit - The title is not up to my par but I decided to go with something ...

drugs, crayon-blonde (Absinthian Dreams Part One of Two)2-11-06I.This is the ecstatic destructionof drugs, crayon blondflashing like capitalist hatred.II.Tomorrow, I’ll smoke you to bedI’ll fuck y

Dancing Inside A Raindrop2-10-06The world is moving fast, quaking like volcanic eruption mania diseasewe’re a disco ball under this excited freedom gin grinbecause I see an entire humanity enrapture

Stars hang in the sky, Like pearls on a drop-necklace; A coronet moon.

"Shut up!" The dragon swung his heavy tail towards his prisoner, barely missing her head. The girl fell silent at last. In the brief momen of quiet, the dragon scanned ...

mmm. this seems far more grand and dramatic than your latest work. the beginning was full of many...creative ways to sum up over-big-ego-ness. i liked how you tied it in ...

Too many emotions for words My mind become muddled A Unicorn in human form The man who captured my heart Who pulled me from the dark place Has his own ...

Life’s bittersweet Like tears and a smiling face The hills to roll down faster, faster So beautiful In graceful passing - shattering like any other tear but in twice the ...

k... this is for my English class... joy, we have to write a sonnet, by Wednesday... Oh my amazing and sparkling star With soft emerald eyes, and bright auburn hair. ...

Max had just stepped through the door, and was now spiraling down through white light, being blinded the entire time. He felt as if swimming through water, and was unable ...

Look, Stop, Right there behind you. Can't you see you're not wanted here? An unwelcome stranger, Crossing the gate, You should've stayed on the safe side, But you couldn't wait. ...

Its a bit old...two months or so...but it does show progress compared to earlier writngs... Lyras slowly crept leaned against the cold dark stone wall. The stench of sweat and ...

The white ball began to glow very bright, and the haze was forcibly drawn to it. "Then let us go," the white ball said, and the both of them rocketed ...