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This chapter is vital to the development of the story, but I'm not sure I pulled it off properly. I think its a bit too short, so it will most ...
Ohio Impromptu - Aug 21, 2006 - 5 min read
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This is only half of the story, the rest will be coming tommorow I suppose. A Heathenly Respite You'd have heard or will hear that Pagans are barbaric and crude, ...
Bjorn - Aug 20, 2006 - 3 min read
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My floor is littered with the pages of things left unsaid, muffled voices that still call out from empty closets unceasingly wishing to be heard, but I will not allow ...
Cameron - Aug 20, 2006 - 2 min read
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For all those who enjoy the classic story of snow white, you might like the plot of Beauty. Beauty is the more darker and in dept version of snow white. ...
roots_unbound - Aug 20, 2006 - 1 min read
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Despite the lack of boredom and write about love ! "The Lost Diary" It’s funny how one topic can bring such commotion in the writing world, I mean jeez. How ...
Chandni - Aug 20, 2006 - 6 min read
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This is really short ... kinda random ... lol ... yeah The boy had lived there for three weeks now. He had counted off the days boringly; adding one small ...
SnipSnap - Aug 20, 2006 - 3 min read
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Yes, this poem is long, but all critiques are greatly appreciated!!! This really lays open my inner-most feelings, so be thorough and gentle. “Observation from the Back Stair” By K.J. ...
Cicero - Aug 19, 2006 - 3 min read
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Hi, this is for an anthology for school. I need a lot of crits on this. ^_~ It was a cold day in December, with the wind blowing in great ...
Prosithion - Aug 19, 2006 - 8 min read
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Chapter 2 “You what?!” Julia McCann said in utter surprise upon hearing Violet’s encounter with The Count of Manarte. Julia and Violet were walking in the park and Violet was ...
Certainly Love - Aug 19, 2006 - 11 min read
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Chapter 1 By: Amanda Punzalan 1819 London Chapter 1 By: Amanda Punzalan 1819 London John Manley, Count of Manarte, was considered a very shy gentleman in society. Everyday he stayed ...
Certainly Love - Aug 19, 2006 - 13 min read
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I wrote this little piece for myself. I deem it rather appropriate for today, as I am celebrating my 701 year in Paris, Texas. Sharty, gleaming Sharty Pride of the ...
Sharty - Aug 19, 2006 - 1 min read
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This is the last time it will be like this. Leaves crinkling underneath my yielding broom as I fight the urge to straddle it, flash a wicked grin and instead ...
xanthan gum - Aug 18, 2006 - 2 min read
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Is heaven reserved only for those with a gleam of divinity in their eyes? Only for those able to grapple the fact that they are damned— (damn fools) or rather ...
Cameron - Aug 18, 2006 - 2 min read
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I'll be away again for a week, so make sure you give me lots of nice advice and nasty criticism to come back to. Love you all, etc etc blah ...
backgroundbob - Aug 18, 2006 - 2 min read
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I swear, I can't write anything serious. But nonetheless...let me unveil my shiny (and sparkly) first attempt at a sci-fi. --- December 10, 1985 The news footage- men in pressed ...
Sam - Aug 18, 2006 - 3 min read