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Umm, ok, this was based on what I thought was a pretty good concept, but I'm not sure if I managed to do it justice. I always seem to come ...

I need ideas for this story i did a while ago called Atlantean, its about some guys, on the ocean floor, etc. It didn't really get a lot of replies ...

i didn't get the point of the poem, really, except for the end. then again i'm multitasking the the maximum.... but i loved all your references to color, which relate ...

The aged and old man sat there, gazing out over the forested green hills before him, sighing deeply. The wind carried a slight chill so he hugged his weathered leather ...

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I tried to add a bit of explination, as this was sort of "mid-story". It might not make it flow well, and for that I apologize. Nat ducked down below ...

My mum wrote this and I thought it was really cute, Maybe us kids stress her out a little too much It's a city of people running here, running there. ...

Him: The one I will never have Love is something I’ve dreamed of all my life When I was little, it was a tool I used to have fun It ...

Basically I had the first two verses in another poem and I really liked them, but I feel the rest just let it down. Any advice? I got sick of ...

Let us now acknowledge the truth – between the two of us, you’ve been laughing at me all along haven’t you? Oh don’t deny it just to spare my feelings. ...

Here I am – make me pretty, let me shine like city lights and polished steel. Make me up so I can pretend that I am plastic because real skin ...

[pre]*Hi! First of, all just a question: How do we rate as in PG, PG-13, etc.?* The moon shone brightly in the cold, dark night. Ghostly clouds sailed in the ...

OK Can you people literally tear this story apart. It's probably not the best ever but I just need opinions on it. I want every thing you think I should ...

It was your first birthday, I gave you some skates, and I couldnt wait - for you to use them. Please dont touch the blade Please dont touch the blade ...