Young Writers Society

i was wondering if anyone could look over this and see what corrections are necessary this is for history i have to propose what topic interests me for an essay ...

Please give me comments on this! "You Forgot" By: Lisa (©LC Sounds) You pushed me away a million miles I feel like I can't talk to you Without being put ...

Memoires of Poison-Kissings *originally titled "Memoire of Samsara Celebrations", I changed it because I thought you folks would like it more. Tell me I was wrong, please, because I prefer ...

Strawberry pink on the decisive blue lines As the taste of postage stamps linger on tongues Flashing by countless bright yellow street signs Here we have fallen - so honest, ...

It's Mother's Day tomorrow and i want to give this poemto my mum, so any comments will be greatly appreciated. For all that you have given me For all the ...

The Cafe was a small private deal. Griffinkeeper was eating breakfast with Silent Aviator. Silent Aviator was definitely armed, but what can one expect from a Marine? It was a ...

This is a crumby history assignment (it wasn't, just what I did) about trench warfare back during WWI. I wrote it in first person, so I need help with it, ...

k so i dont usually post my stuff places but decided to try and see She has so much, But left with so little, Crying out for help, And wanting ...

Okay, I wasn't sure where to put this: Fantasy Fiction or Other or Writing Tips. This is two paragraphs from the novel I'm working on and I need help with ...

George decided to perm his hair the night before the wedding. It was getting long and shaggy, quite like it had been in his younger, surfing days. His bride-to-be would ...

Dust embraces the morning Like a freshly fallen dew And the steam from the tipple Extols its weary wisdom, Chanting in whistles and The grinding of rotors. The unquestioning miners ...

moldy lemons in the hallway, white magnolias pouring down the ceiling wall Clicking keyboards , quarters on the floor, white hallway, noise noise, my emotions pour through my teeth white ...

Only a Lost Child "To betray is to love without choosing," you said as we stood alone at twilight. I only bit the inside of my lip and looked at ...

I really like this. Nothing else to say, I guess. Just good work.. -*Shimmer

Yesterday, at a quarter to two, I walked into a class. A class like none I'd had before Like none I'll ever have. This class that they call Calculus- How ...