Young Writers Society

There once was a little boy who longed for nothing but to able to play outside. He would sit in his chair with his long almond eyes, staring outside at ...

Dylan the Vain Alexander ran for his life, even running into the door on his way out and tripping over stairs before he finally reached the subway back to his ...

This is my latest effort, it's not my best work by far I feel I have lost something important in my skill, I took months off to discover what it ...

If you read Ender's game, how was it?

This chapter is vital to the development of the story, but I'm not sure I pulled it off properly. I think its a bit too short, so it will most ...

This is only half of the story, the rest will be coming tommorow I suppose. A Heathenly Respite You'd have heard or will hear that Pagans are barbaric and crude, ...

My floor is littered with the pages of things left unsaid, muffled voices that still call out from empty closets unceasingly wishing to be heard, but I will not allow ...

For all those who enjoy the classic story of snow white, you might like the plot of Beauty. Beauty is the more darker and in dept version of snow white. ...

Despite the lack of boredom and write about love ! "The Lost Diary" It’s funny how one topic can bring such commotion in the writing world, I mean jeez. How ...

This is really short ... kinda random ... lol ... yeah The boy had lived there for three weeks now. He had counted off the days boringly; adding one small ...

Yes, this poem is long, but all critiques are greatly appreciated!!! This really lays open my inner-most feelings, so be thorough and gentle. “Observation from the Back Stair” By K.J. ...

Hi, this is for an anthology for school. I need a lot of crits on this. ^_~ It was a cold day in December, with the wind blowing in great ...

Chapter 2 “You what?!” Julia McCann said in utter surprise upon hearing Violet’s encounter with The Count of Manarte. Julia and Violet were walking in the park and Violet was ...

Chapter 1 By: Amanda Punzalan 1819 London Chapter 1 By: Amanda Punzalan 1819 London John Manley, Count of Manarte, was considered a very shy gentleman in society. Everyday he stayed ...

I wrote this little piece for myself. I deem it rather appropriate for today, as I am celebrating my 701 year in Paris, Texas. Sharty, gleaming Sharty Pride of the ...