Young Writers Society

so much energy with nowhere to go i don't know how to let it flow let it leave let it out i feel that things are just about to blow, ...

One of God’s Wonders A ball of flame, hot and white Red and orange shining, yellow giving light Purple, pink wisps of air Perfect wonder everywhere Light and warmth dance ...

No matter how I tried to read this critically, it just wouldn't come. I could only read it casually, taking it for what I see it as, rather than what ...

I can't switch off, my brain keeps running, I can't stay still, I have to do something concentration span of a few seconds, I'm gifted, so my teacher reckons, my ...

Daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. Take me by the hand, Feel your toes in sun-kissed sand… Innocent and carefree, Thoughts swim into my head. ...

The Mask Clear, translucent skin Cemented and opaque Lush, beautiful lips Stifled and stitched Large, glowing eyes Overwhelmed and shut Smooth, untainted cheek Stretched and barred Shapely, arched bro

I just got out of the hospital and have been placed on these lovely orange medication pills. Bear with me. The nurses were bantering, their nonsense never ending Like a ...

LET MY PEOPLE STAY There is a place on the Mediteranean where I learned to walk, run and ride where I experienced love, loss and life Here I was born, ...

A face against a screen of Pale glass, dotted with sweat. In a dream that's true But devoid of reality. The long, pale fingers that scrape Down my back Through ...

This was written (obviously) between waking up and falling asleep again, so please let me know how to make it appropraite for the waking world. Thanks. Sleep sharing a couch, ...

Okay...I'm trying to get back into the site, so I'm reading and critiquing. But I do hope that if I help you with your stuff, you will return the favor ...

BAD CHICKS "A bad chick is someone who handles

In one place you follow a period with a capital, other times you do not. Kinda confusing. Also, why is the "i" in the brackets uncapitalised? Also, when you said ...

a hail of brainwashed pride, flooding any particles left in the murky puddles where all the connections withered and died. a catalyst to precipitation, one crack of weakness and a ...

Myopic Hindsight If the earth bucked, split, Swallowed me and chewed Home to jagged pieces, You would remember waves Sifting a castle back to sand. Wouldn’t you? If I screamed ...