Young Writers Society

I don't think I put the right words in here to express what I feel... and nobody will know what I feel. So enjoy, comments greatly appreciated... Fate by Elizabeth ...

Cut my skin with your razor blade Cut me from behind because your sun doesn't shine Take away from me my innocent mind You take away from me my sunshine ...

If you find the light and then you loose your sight, Then you as well have been hounded By the hunters of time. If you get your freedom And then ...

ooooo....crows... I really enjoyed this one hon, I'd do a more indepth critique but I'm pressed for time. Later then I will. Betty

No one. No one can be trusted. A hand to be held, a hand to be wasted. A mouth to be kissed, those lips will be gone. That boy you ...

NIGHTFALL The dusky sky is turning blacker, Bright stars are coming out. The blueness is fading away, Night brings her fears and doubts. The Sun is a red ball on ...

My alarm clock woke me this morning With its infernal, hated pounding in my mind, I huddled beneath my thick blankets Trying to gather the pieces of a beautiful dream ...

I would really, really, really like everyone's comments. Good and bad. My Road Here I am, alone I walk Down roads of rocks and ice. There’s no one here with ...

MESSAGE FROM MIDNIGHT...SORRY I ACCIDENTALLY DELETED THE FIRST POST (WITH THE POEM SO GO DOWN TO MY MESSAGE AT THE BOTTOM OF THE POST FOR NOW WITH THE POEM UNTILL ...

I'm lying on my bed, Wrapped in too many clothes - I've been exposed, I feel naked. Today, Dreaded Tuesday, Was always meant to be the end. Was it? Well ...

BATTLE The clanging of swords, The beating of drums, The chanting of men, The killing of hopes. The screams of defiance, The screams of hatred, The screams of agony, The ...

The topic for the competition is "a building." I'm doing this through my school but I thought I'd let you rip this apart before my teachers, because I'm generally quite ...

This is in the same vein as my other poem, Gaol, though hopefully this one will get more feedback! I'm not sure it's as strong as the other, but there ...

Here’s for all those times I wish I never gave a damn! I wish I never cared Because you’re not worth a second chance You left me alone You didn’t ...

Lord, let it rain. Let it rain upon my tearful face So both our tears can slide together And become one.