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Very nice, Brad. You know I'm fond of your work. My biggest suggestion would be to (in some way) move the second stanza to a more active tone. The languid ...
Galatea - Sep 8, 2006 - 1 min read
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SHADOW DANCE A shadow walks this road so lonely Fading from the darkened past I remember what the fire told me- That even shadows do not last A specter runs ...
firefaery - Sep 7, 2006 - 2 min read
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(I feel obligated to at least try, so here are my notebook scratchings.) Hey, Miss Beautiful Can you feel the buzz? Lithium is lying on your tongue and you - ...
xanthan gum - Sep 7, 2006 - 1 min read
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This was an interesting project I had to do in my English class. We had to read Sound of Thunder by Ray Bradbury, and then compose a poem solely from ...
Niamh - Sep 7, 2006 - 1 min read
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A poem written for a charecter named K'ratcha. Let me know what you think. Son and Slave of Kings No rhyme can contain the tale I tell, No verse will ...
gyrfalcon - Sep 7, 2006 - 2 min read
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Read it, hopefully understand it. Then comment. You know the drill. UN- On the beach at Aberdaron there was a man giving donkey rides to little children. When the police ...
backgroundbob - Sep 6, 2006 - 1 min read
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I touch, I feel the adrenaline through my fingers Every press, every skip, every step on the pedal I dance, I twinkle my body warmth creates; In my soul, an ...
Chandni - Sep 5, 2006 - 1 min read
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Okay! This poem lives and breathes on formatting, so you can check it out, in its very pretty formatting, at the link below: Tell me what you think here!
Snoink - Sep 4, 2006 - 1 min read
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Heaven Isn’t Everything Even through infinity, There are impossibilities. And because we killed eternity, God brought us to our knees. But heaven isn’t everything, It’s the people on earth that ...
Heather_BlackCain - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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Forever Isn’t Long Enough Tell me why you’re here, And then I’ll disappear. It took awhile for me to see, Why you always prayed for me. Forever isn’t long enough, ...
Heather_BlackCain - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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Reams of papers, covered in darkling texts, they scream. Two people bound by matrimony, divided by ten thousand going to war - how long until one will become half by ...
xanthan gum - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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Hello again friends, I'm back. I wrote a short poem and I feel like sharing it. I posted it on my blog but I think I'll get more feedback over ...
Darkmoon158 - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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To God I’m sorry, But it’s like a star falling in day… And God, I still don’t know how to say, I’m sorry, But death will take me soon… And ...
Heather_BlackCain - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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I Don’t Want To She thinks that she loves nightmares, And once I almost died. Because she kills the dreamers, And screams back that I lied. I don’t want to ...
Heather_BlackCain - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read
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Never There’s nothing I can say to you… And there’s nothing I can do. There just can’t be a single dream, That I can place for you… There’s everything they ...
Heather_BlackCain - Sep 3, 2006 - 1 min read