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Author's Note: Mainly what I'm curious about here is, are their reactions realistic, and are the characters fairly consistent? Thanks guys! ~~ Michelle rushed into the hospital, a middle-aged woman ...

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All these chapters are pretty short except for a couple. So, it's not a lot to read or critique but whatever you can find I'll be happy to hear. Well, ...

The elves returned to the shoemaker's house and spent the whole night working away at the shoes. It took almost until dawn. They were, after all, only a few inches ...

Hey guys. Yes, another attempted novel from yours truly. Except this one I've attempted to plan and here's my frist draft of the prologue. It's generally a pretty generic-fantasy type ...

The Stone of Lavitaes ... not sure about the name (kinda cheesy) Chapter I Lakki ran. She ran faster than she ever had before. The wind whipped past her ears, ...

Silence speaks: my sisters gracefully swept along the corridors, their exquisiteness blinding me as they sat down beside their looms and spinning wheels.Adina, Bronwen and Rhiannon they were named and

~I heard it again - another gun shot, cracking in the still autumn night~ Ma and Daddy are drunk, their still, lifeless bodies lay strung across the floor, Daddy's arm ...

First off, an explanation. I haven't written anything, really, in about two months. That other prologue I did was all done on-line. It kinda got my creative juices running again, ...

There's no job too small for an elf. Nope. They'll anything for anyone. Provided that they are well paid for it. 'Cause an elf can do anything. Be any size ...

Maggie and Davinia sat in the sharp, dark shadows of the thorn bushes which encircled the outer edges of Greenwich. Maggie's, tiny, soft breath, that of a child four or ...

Okay it doesn't have much romance in it at this point but it's definitely coming. Prologue- Has someone loved you, but you can’t love them back? Has it ever led ...

The fortress of Kroan stood like a bleak beacon against the sky. It reeked with night, wind, and rain on a cliff. Three hundred feet below the Malistraan Ocean pounded ...

Please guys, last time I didn't get many comments there for I didn't know how it was so I ask please please please comment this time. Chapter 3 About an ...

It had been a long time since Zyferous had seen light. Years infact. But now, as he stood atop the Greenwhich Hill, Jade Emblem clasped in his long, wirey hands, ...