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Here is my biblical reference for this story. (There is one for nearly all of them.) It's from Job in the old testament: 3:4 Let that day be darkness; let ...

UPDATE - FINISHED VERSION OF CHAPTER TEN “I don’t understand your decision, Esben,” said Councillor Armen, a tremor evident in his voice, water forming at the base of his eye. ...

At first I didn’t know whether it was dust or smoke. A thick haze of vapor hung over the city, masking the setting sun. I stepped forward as though in ...

1 18th century. Kassa fiddled with her skirts impatiently, never before had the introductions been so slow! Beside her, her brother watched her wondering why she was so eager to ...

Part one of a fantasy story that still need a real name. any suggestions. i know everything that happens in this story, there's just the matter of sorting it out. ...

2 When Damon had finished his duty he returned to his father and waited to be dismissed to go back to his cave. He didn’t have to wait long; his ...

Homework, friends, teachers, family; isn’t there any time for myself anymore? I guess there isn’t with all the chaos in my life having a little “quality time” with myself isn’t ...

Thanks to the er...4 people who reviewed the first part of this. If you would like to read the introduction please go here: Part I. Even though I appreciate the ...

Okay I know I just posted yesterday but I reviewed two pieces of work before posting this so technically I'm in the clear, right? This is the beginning of my ...

This is a co-write i'm doing with a friend of mine. I had to write the beginning, with the boy as the main person, and she's starting the next day. ...

If you critic this please take out all your stress on me and be as brutal as you can : 1 A young man with ruby red eyes stood to ...

This is the opening to a novel I have in my head. Hopefully, it will eventually get put onto paper. I know it needs revising, and I'd really like some ...

The Moonstone, a royally built vessel lay elegantly on the dark, night sea. The ship was an Elenian craft, marked undoubtedly by it’s broad bow and sharp curvature. A savagely ...

I made a new topic because I posted the first one too much at once. Moderators can delete the old one (Boundless) if they want. Prologue It happened so long ...

I've been working on a novel for a little while and this is what I have so far. I'm headed in a couple of directions after this part and I ...