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A short, uneventful chapter, But I felt this was something I had to do. I wanted to show that Melody wasn't as unwanted as she thought. THe people around her ...

Well, it's been forever since I've posted on here, so sorry for the wait. In between long terms of writer's block and being grounded from the internet for weeks on ...

I'm still working on characterization in third person, all advice is greatly appreciated. Even if you haven't read the previous two installments. I mainly want to know how the characters ...

Jasper turned left to right in front of the mirror inside the Hollister store, admiring the new clothes he was trying on. He wore a gray Hollister shirt and a ...

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...

~Please read the prologue first. Enjoy, reading!~ This chapter is revised. Chapter One Fall 1815 Dry, crisp leaves of several colors fell down from the decaying trees, onto the bronze-touched ...

The Golden State Edited, again Nothing great came into my life until she had. School, life, everything was bland. I was chronically emotion and lifeless, ever since the day my ...

At exactly three o’clock, I went over to the school’s library to meet Jasper. I found him sitting at one of those small, round tables reading a book. “What are ...

*After reading this, I realized it doesn't make much sense if you don't read the prolouge first.I pushed my dark hair out of my eyes, desperate to find my last ...

Long awaited Chapter 4! (Long awaited for me, at least!) Too clear things up, THIS IS WRITTEN IN ZANE’S POV!!! He is just remembering, and we go through him meeting ...

C.1-P.2 Christmas break was over, and Kimber stood in front of the school she would now be a part of. The bell had already rung, and the remaining stragglers were ...

Hope this chapter reveals something. I didn't give you all the details of the 'secret', But I will, as the story progresses. This is entirely Nate's POV or a third ...

I promise you I am reworking the previous chapters! Things will be slowed down (later on there will be chapters like 3.5, 4.5 and such, so this is not going ...

Ack, sorry for posting so late. I re-wrote the chapter and split it yet again, into two. So the 'exciting' (if you can call it that) part, is in chapter ...

:!: This is a new piece I'm working on, in -gasp- third person. Just like POD. Any advice is graciously accepted, and I enjoy the harshest critiques you can give. ...