Young Writers Society

Fade Away You just had to do it You couldn't stop You had to cause his body to drop The last thing you heard was a muffled thud Now he's ...

I run toward the light, Always pushing toward the edge of the darkness, Looking for a chance to be seen, A chance to finally step out of the shadow that ...

An Angel For Me The light shined through her beautiful hair, Gorgeous and talented, her skin so fair. My child, my angel, and still to this day, She's beautiful and ...

Someday I smile; I nod, I say everything's okay. Hoping I can get the courage, To tell the truth someday. You look deep in my eyes, And still can't see ...

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PerfectIf it weren't for you,I'd be perfect.If you weren't here,I'd have someone on my side.If I had never met you,Never said hi;I'd know what it was like,To love and be ...

To My Father A small boy, looking up sees his father smiling down and he knows that he is loved. For his heart is of golden affection and diamond love. ...

Better, but too personal. To the casual observer, many of your images don't connect. Not as charming a tactic as it seems. The seperate phrases and images were nice, they ...

running down cobbled streets, did you see the fading lanterns? knocked and broken in retreat, everyone shut their doors. pounding echoes of vibration, the oxygen was inhaled and all the ...

Kind of blew right by me... Very descriptive and had great imagery.

a tug of the tie, two fingers pulling cranberry-red silk loose, a habitual toss of your head making a fold of hair fall into your eyes open collar revealing soft ...

The Mirror What do I see in this mirror? In this mirror all cracked and dingy? I see a memory, a tiny memory, and what I saw so many years ...

pendulums of emotion swing above mahogany fireplaces with chimneys to let the steam out and firewood to keep the cauldron boiling; I've pulled out too many petals over you. drowning ...

I liked the last two stanzas. Nice poem.

when you finally see the words they mean, maybe you'll learn to fit in the box they made. and when you go along with the lines they said thinking too ...