Hey, welcome to YWS!
Very nice job here. Have you read/written much poetry? If you have, post it here - I'd like to read more!
The rhyming works, it's not awkward like in some poems I have read here. The first stanza is my favourite I just have to say that "only now do you realise" sounds a little weird, but that's just one thing.
I liked this.
All the love from
Demeter
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