Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort of rule!
Goldie
Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort of rule!
Goldie
My god! It's genius! It flowed like a dream and the words were well chosen.
I am pleased to say that i have no critisism!
^^
hahahahha, you really had me laughing. a cinch to spell, haha I love it. I think I'm gonna go write a cutesy rhyme-y poem now. Thanks for the inspiration!
made my day. :]
all the best,
s
Awww, how cute! I love it when I read cutesy, makes-you-smile poetry! It reminds me of an adorable children's book--have you ever considered writing children's books? I think you'd--no, I know you'd be--very good at it! I found nothing wrong with this at all--not even any nitpicks!
loved it, the rhyme scheme is great, subject matter is good, jam is great. W00T!!! GO JAM
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