The fourth stanza, lines two and four, doesn't really flow.
I like how you used "fairytale glue" because it is such a cute ending even though it's kind of melancholic (or so it seems to me).
Try adding some punctuation mark after the last line of each stanza. It'll help the reader find the rhythm and when to pause or slow down when reading it.
So I think these lines (the last line of each stanza) needs some ending punctuation, whether it is a period or an ellipse or an exclamation mark, etc.
that will slowly fade with time
like we'd never been alone
and stop saying all my prayers,
for my fairytale glue
Overall it's great!
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