I like the poem. What kind of poem is it? A free verse?
How do you not know that it's free verse? Can you read?
Besides that, I enjoyed it. It was very sweet -- very sweet, and it had this sparkling quality that played between the words as I read. It was a little bland, though. It needs something that jumps out, I think, to move to the next level, but if you meant to write a lovely little piece, you have succeeded.
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