Hey, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a little comment or review.
First of all, I do like the neatness of each verse and I like the fact that I can smell flowers while reading this. With the repeating ABAB pattern of rhyming and starting your poem with
and start the rest of the other lines withGo where
This poem feels like opening/entering a world thaf starts with the season spring. The last poem had the pattern AABB though but that's alright. I'mma give your poem a 8 out of 10. Good job!where
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