Dear Mr. Moon,
I'm sorry not many of us have taken the time to thank you.
You're there when the darkness overtakes our mind and soul.
It shrouds over us like a black cloud, and brings fear.
but you're there to scare it away,
and for that, I thank you.
You listen to what I have to say,
you know my darkest secrets.
You see everything I do,
you hold my deepest memories,
but you never tell a soul, not even the stars.
You don't look at me with shame or disappointment,
you don't judge me with harsh words,
and for that, I thank you.
When I feel abandoned or lost, you're there.
When I feel hopeless or scared, you're there.
There is never a time I feel alone, even when I am,
and for that, I thank you.
It saddens me to know that not many others pay heed to your being.
It saddens me to know that your existence is of little relevance to people.
But to me, you're the most important one out there,
and you treat everyone the same way,
and for that, I thank you.
When the night comes to an end, and the sun rises above the mountain,
I raise my hand to wave goodbye, until we meet again.
Though I'm sad to see you leave, and a tear trickles down my cheek,
I know it won't be long until you're high and bright in the sky,
Ready to hear my greatest adventures, and silently listen until my eyes grow tired.
And although I, nor anyone else in the universe can say it enough,
Mr. Moon, I thank you.
It's pretty self explanatory, and maybe just a tad too simple. I wrote this when I was in the fifth grade and just recently found it in some old boxes. Thought I'd play around with it. I'm also not very accustomed to writing poems (At all) so any criticism you have is taken with much appreciation! :)
-SARAHJO
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