Hello CapitalMonday here for a review. i like to begin that poem could relate to many people since when we hear a song that reminds us of someone we have lost or someone we haven't seen in forever, we cry. This poem expresses that nicely since when the person playing the song, their tear is splatted onto the instrument they are playing. Also this poem could be describe as well written on since it has a great message and the tone of this poem would be sorrow.
Nitpick(s):
i feel like this is a bit repeated (in a sense) since what would this helpless need be (maybe describe a little better).sweet and sorrowful, a helpless need
i think you should change this stanza to the song played on as the people were silenced or something of the same context.silencing all but the song
Overall, I think people could relate since, like i said, when they play anything of any sort for some reason we cry since that song we listen could be used to describe the person's feelings to someone they loved or something. Also i believe the message of this poem could be describe as when music falls to a silence, the person you love will fall silent too. (If that makes sense).
Farewell,
CapitalMonday
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