I especially enjoy short poems such as this one. Getting the point across without saying too much. I love the beach, so this sits well with me and makes me miss the beach. Only thing I will say is that there is a break between "bro" and "ken", which is probably just a keyboard fluke but just thought you should be aware of it! I especially enjoy the line "emotions raucously holding back in me" because it sounds like the person you're writing about has things going on in their life that just....scream inside of them with no way out. Great job with this poem! Keep 'em coming.
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