The stance of the writer seems to be a modern take on the mouning process. Dont mope over my death, celebrate my life, and le nature maintain my prescence in my stead in its own beautiful way. Recycling life. A process wich you find poetic. The structure is good, the message refreshing. You wont care because you won be able to. I would however suggest that you try to integrate imagery into your statement. Or maybe vary your vocabulary a bit. Of course poetic licence is all yours an if this is what you want, disregard my comments. Your grammer is also impecable. The last line is meant to tell people to embrace thier own demise?"go west bound". Good work.
Points: 361
Reviews: 54
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