I liked the writing in this piece you put imagery into my head and I could picture in my mind what was going on in the poem. The thing I really didn't understand was why you did the & sign instead of writing out the word.
I enjoyed the title Nature Walk because love is nature I personally thought that very creative. I can see the people together and falling in love but you never shared the other persons emotions and what they said or did i would have enjoyed to read what that they had said or did to make you feel that way.&mortification & furiously hot blushing
Points: 2152
Reviews: 17
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