Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well...this...was interesting...I don't quite know what you're trying to convey here, I get a sense of something happening, and it certainly is intriguing but I feel like we are indeed missing out on a little too much context for this to make sufficient sense here.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Hello there. I am watching you.
Oay...well that's a terrible start, oh dear, now I have to search the house to make sure there are no intruders, well this is off to a pretty scary start here, gonna have to watch myself now...ahh...well, that aside, this is a pretty fun start here, certainly gets your attention right off the bat this one.
Every step you make, my dear old friend, I will be following carefully. I know what you're up to. I know you want to hurt me. You are constantly trying to find an opening, a careless moment to spill my blood. Well; I've got bad news for you. You shall never succeed.
Okay...I can breathe easy now, it looks like they were talking to someone else there...really did get worried for a second..xD...well at any rate, this seems pretty interesting here...looks like this a person perhaps sending a message to someone that is trying to kill this person perhaps and well by the way that this is phrased this looks like the person who is about to get killed is someone that is pretty darn confident about their chances of escaping with their lives here.
I never thought you would be like that. All around, people wear fake faces and then bang, stab, shoot, and their so called best friend suffer. I thought you were different.
Do you remember all the times we spent together? All the fun and secrets we shared? How could such an evil, disgusting plan come up to you, after all we've been through? I never hurt you that way.
Hmm...well it sounds like their describing someone that was this person's friend or possibly even best friend at some point, but it looks like now this one somehow turned into some sort of killer there and it looks like they attempted to kill him perhaps...or something along those lines is going on here. At any rate, this is certainly very interesting so far....looks like it could do with a lot more backstory here though...at this point we don't even know whose involved in what so it does take away from the excitement of this somewhat there.
No, my dear, old friend.
I will never let you burn me with that god damn cigar.
It will be an eternal quest of yours.
Oooh...well eternal quests are certainly fun...but hmm...well this looks like it'll be one of the more sad eternal quests that only lead towards sadness this one. Well..this was certainly an interesting ending...does seem to be bringing this message of sorts to a fitting end but like I mentioned earlier, I think this really does need to have a bit more context to make more sense.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall...its an interesting story, but umm..it needs a bit of work before it can truly make sense on its own here, at this point, its not as interesting as it could be...well anyway that's all I've gotta say here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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