Hello, It is review day and I, PonyzandPokez am here to review this um... poem (kinda long one if you ask me :p) Here is what I thought of it:
Great poem! Okay, the ONE thing confusing was this:
I'd change this to "butterfly WINGS" because butterflies DON'T have feathers Otherwise wonderful job on this, no spelling errors as far as I can see and there are no grammar problems, here is your rating:chasing butterfly feathers
Spelling:100%
Grammar:100%
Formatting:100%
Emotion:30%
Overall:465 out of 500
WOW! AMAZING this poem was REALLY good. I'm really proud of you. This was great! I hope I get to read more stuff by you soon! You have a REAL gift for writing, I hope that you keep writing so I can be reading. Happy review day!
~PonyzandPOkez
Points: 569
Reviews: 66
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