Hi there, LGF here for a review;
This made me think, this poem. It was interesting, the whole concept of isolation. It felt free, and raw, like you didn't need any editing to get your thoughts on paper, and I loved it. Some beautiful imagery;
And not even the strongest of men
Could ever break its steel grip.
Chased by the howling fury
Of the thoughts that echo 'round my head.
It had to read it through a couple of times to really get the full extent of it, but I really liked it. It was different from a lot of the teen-angst poems you see on here, all so edited and perfected, this was a lot rawer and free. Your style of writing really is beautiful.
My favorite lines;
As the sun journeys gracefully higher
With the ease of a dancer,
So smooth and soft,
Overall a really beautiful poem, interesting and raw.
Keep up the good work;
LGF
Points: 10
Reviews: 51
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