Hi there, LGF here for a review.
Neat little song you get here, hey?
I liked it, and if I was giving you a grade for it I'd give you an A-. You had some unique things to say about love and some good rhythm as well but at times it seemed a little vague/cliche.
For example, the chorus;
I wanna take you in my arms and hold you,
I wanna kiss you till it feels right
I wanna stay with you until torrow
All night, alright
Now, this is just my opinion, but here goes. I thought it sounded just a lot like a bunch of other love songs, if you know what I mean. I wanna kiss you, I wanna hold you all night. Something about it just seemed off, and maybe a little vague as if it wasn't really your experience, just your knowledge of what love is.
Apart from that, I thought it was good, some nice flow and repetition.
Keep up the good work;
LGF
Points: 10
Reviews: 51
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