Wow! This is fantastic. You described that perfectly. This was a great metaphor. I was thinking of someone going insane, but you might be thinking of something else. This was perfect, expect that you're missing an apostrophe in 'i'd' in the 4th to last line. Other than that, you're good. Fantastic poem I must say! It was lovely. You spaced each line perfectly. Good job and keep up the good work!!
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