Hey! Retro here for a review
Usually in my reviews I do nitpicks to start with but I cannot find a single one. This is grammatically perfect so Kudos
In terms of your context I think this is absolutely stunning. You have some beautiful and frankly outstanding imagery here. I love the metaphor, and more importantly this makes you think.
My personal favourite bit was:
And I am made to watch
as cell by cell,
crystal by crystal,
you let pride and nature turn you to stone.
I have a thing about endings as it is, they need to be a decent crux which brings the poem to a comfortable close and this most certainly does that. It is beautiful and breath taking.
You get a like for me and a sincere thank you because this is incredible.
Keep it up,
~Retro
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