Hi, J.C. here for a review!
Well...it's a bit hard to write a review for such a poem, speaking honestly. There's not much to review, here.
As a poem there is an essence of it that can be intriguing and or inspiring. That's what poetry is all about, I guess, finding the deeper meaning in something and expounding upon it.
[qoute]I bleed
And bleed
And bleed
And bleed
And[/qoute]
Wow! That was one long quote!
Actually, I find the poem interesting because it's so short. It's almost like looking at Franz Kline Painting. Essentially, you stand there with your head leaning to the side and say, 'What the?' But there is always something in them that the viewer, or in this case the reader, can take away from it.
I suppose I would interpret this poem as the essence of live. Bleeding endlessly, that's how it feels sometimes. We waste away the hours and days and months and years, the life draining from us, and for what? It's probably not what you had in mind, but the last 'and' is what made me think of that.
Overall, I can't say it was an amazing poem, but I can't say it wasn't, so I'll just give you a thumbs up and leave it at that.
Thank you Sassykat!
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