Beautiful poem.
I love the way
you broke up the lines
in such interesting formats
I had to read this poem several times before making sense of it, and I am still not sure of the poem's exact intent. It is clear that the speaker addresses a preference to follow their heart, and not just the knowledge in their head that drops them "into the sea of skin." However, a little less stereotypically, you mentioned the interruptions that would occur by following ones heart, which seems to make complete sense, as the most desirable choice is not always the most right or most direct.
The first and last paragraph seem to convey the theme that the speaker is optimistic. They feel that if they follow themselves, they can accomplish anything. However, I found the middle two paragraphs contradictory to this, which really confused me.
So I kept reading the poem, and thinking, and I have come to the concluded that the idea is most likely that neither one's knowledge or desires alone can guide them on the proper path. (please let me know what was the intended purpose! i am very interested)
Anyways, great work, and keep writing
~Hadj
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