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I like the first part as it keeps a nice rhythm and tone. As well as it keeps it simple and nice and how it sort of sets a scene, and gives an okay description of the bells.
I like the second part because, it gives time and more description to what the bells
symbolise and tell. Happiness.
Whats cool about the third part, is that it can shows that the bells aren't just happy or good. That they can be bad and more human like.With good and bad.
What I like about the fourth part is that it keeps all the musical parts of it and shows that the bells are coming to an end.And that bells will always be in culture ringing for a purpose.
I am usually reminded of parts of this poem, when it starts to snow in my area and I am walking some where. I see my breathe and the quietness of my town and when the Church bells ring it completes it for me.
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