We are writing school applications for our English class and i need some serious help in the grammar department. (i write like i talk, badly) I don't care if you criticize me on every word, just as long as it makes this better. if i don't get a high grade on this, my parents will ground me and take my computer. (they obviously have no respect for the eighth amendment)
I am a fourteen year old girl who’s interests include: geology, geography, astronomy, anthropology, history, drama, Debate, reading, writing, ice skating, roller blading, , rock climbing, swimming, , hiking, traveling, and music. Words that describe me would be: happy, nice, friendly, enthusiastic, motivated, outgoing, fun, creative, intelligent, and dependable. I am open to trying new things and meeting new people. I am a positive person and do my best to make the people around me happy too. I am a quick learner and I always get my work done on time. Some of the many school programs interest me such as American History, Community Service, Creative Writing, Drama, Geography, Geology, Logic Music, Physics, and World History. I look forward to learning more about your school.
-Please don't put titles all in caps in the future.
Cheers,
Alainna
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