Hi~ It's been a while since I the last time I was here. Things got in between and writing fell to the background once again, but I'm trying to pick it up again. The only frustrating part is that I have a writers block, an issue.
The story I'm writing is based on multiple main characters, 3 of which are based on a real person, me included. These 3 "personalities" were invented 10 years ago and served many purposes in our life. After I discovered that making them alive through animations was impossible due to lack of skill I resorted to writing their stories rather then making them visible, which eventually lead to my current story. The only problem I have now is that, while I got 10 years older, those 3 "personalities" remained the same age (14-16 yo).
I'm finding it hard to continue my story because it seems to become a bit childish. It's not a kind of story that my 20-30 yo friends would like to read, but I have no idea how I can improve the story. Should the characters become older so they are easier to relate to or could the story itself be not interesting enough to read? Has anyone experienced an issue ike this before?
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