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Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:34 pm
Apple says...



I know that I haven’t been on in a very long time guys but that’s only because I have been very busy. Never fear, Apple will endeavour to come online more frequently on the school holidays (which is in, like, four days). :D

Anyways, I came on specifically today to ask y’all a question of great importance. It’s about selfish characters. I am currently writing a story about a teenage rich, snobby boy that has gotten everything he has ever wanted from his father. Now his attitude at first stinks – it’s all about him, no one else; but progression does kick in and by the end of the novel he’ll be a new man. That’s how it is supposed to be.

But when surfing the net I came across this show that had a character that was kind of like my character in the way that he was a coward and thought only of himself. The comments on this character were brutal. Now here comes my question: what the hell should I do? My character is supposed to be a cocky character, it is in his blood but if I have people hating him before they even get to his development, then I’m in trouble.

As a reader, do you hate cocky, selfish characters? Personally I find them hilarious and I LOVE to see their growth into a nicer person towards the end of the novel. Does anyone else gree with me? Please give your feedback, I am just about ready to tear out my hair (not really, but I am close!).
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:48 pm
YuriStrike says...



I tend to hate the snobby rich, but if it's a comedy than not that much.




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Mon Nov 21, 2011 11:26 pm
Leahweird says...



I think there is a fine, fine, line between cocky, prideful characters (who are awesome) and outright jerks. It must be tricky to right, but I'm sure it can be done.




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Tue Nov 22, 2011 4:21 am
Payne says...



I agree...I think it would depend heavily on how cocky he is. If he's a jerk all the time, with no redeeming qualities before his character development begins, it could be a definite problem. Also, he shouldn't seem to lead a charmed life; if his cockiness gets him in trouble, or causes problems for him, it could make him a slightly more likable character. A character who 'has it all' probably won't be accepted as well by most readers.
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Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:49 am
Apple says...



Alright, thanks guys. I'll just have to be careful when writing so I don't step over the line. THIS is going to be majorly difficult. May as well roll up my sleeves and get to work!
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Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:03 pm
Stori says...



There's a classic example of a selfish character- Ebenezer Scrooge. Maybe it would help to read about him?




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Sun Dec 04, 2011 1:59 am
demib says...



i love cocky characters but sometimes when people write about them they tend to turn snobby. doesnt that happen to you?
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Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:26 am
StoryWeaver13 says...



Usually I get a little tired of the cocky-characters-trying-to-change, but you know sometimes they really are funny. I think a lot of it has to do with your approach. Find ways to make us sympathize/understand where your character is coming from so he's more than a stuck-up jerk, and make sure that at the beginning you do still give him some likeable qualities to carry through to the end (it makes the change seem more natural, too).
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Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:03 am
hockeyfan87 says...



I get a little tired of the cockiness however I like reading when they are cocky and rude to people but on the inside they are actually good people. That could be an option?
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