Is a black car required? And, if a tobacco brown Chevy would be suspect, would coming on foot be too odd? (Rental?)
Would it be plausible for two agents to look into the theft of cats when it could be related to a similar crime that resulted in a loss of people's internal organs?
And would having Ang and Jae pretend such a crime happened out of state as well ("Yeah, same thing happened in Mississippi. We think there might be a small cult movement growing, same MO over there, and it's come to our concern--") be good?
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