So basically, two of my main characters have issues: they both have this little thing called "darkness" messing around with them throughout the book, and it's like a demon inside of them that tempts them to do horrible things and disobey the ones they love and trust. It usually is a really rare occurrence, but I've been doing it more frequently since an enormous plot twist is approaching.
So, I can only use word count to describe how this is going.
Word Count for Draft 1, Chapters 1-13 : 80,374 [I will cut this down A BUNCH when the first draft is complete...]
Character 1 Darkness Attacks: 7
Character 2 Darkness Attacks: 9
Yeah, I feel like that's a ton. But what are your opinions? Should I find a way to omit a few, or space them out a little more?
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