First off, if you're going to write about vampires (or any mythical monster) Do your research!And yes I mean some very extensive research. You must know what makes a vampire a vampire. When you read a vampire myth think about why it's a vampire myth. Such as fangs, the vampire's need their fangs to puncture blood vessels when they bite.
Now remember that vampires are mythical monsters. Medieval vampire stories terrified people. They didn't make girls swoon they made people scream and run. Don't make them all pretty and perfect to make the 'ideal' lover boy image, that just irks a lot of people.
If there is romance in your story make it believable. Don't have people falling in love when they first meet. Relationships take time to build and effort to last. Also when and if they fall in love have them concentrate on personality more than looks because obsessing over some ones looks is lust not love.
Hope that helps feel free to pm me if you want anymore help
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