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Event 3: Somonka (Tanka Pairs)



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kattee says...



Spoiler! :

the ocean is the redflag-next-shore

shuttled to your shore
I shoved parts of Me between
your shell-blades, Others
were drowned by My Own waves -- you’re
lovely as always.
don’t flatter me as
your whining damped my pixie
dust, too murky to
carry on my shell blades -- i’ll
drown if you don’t leave so please.


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Tue Aug 03, 2021 11:28 pm
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looseleaf says...



I guess I'll participate in something (this is really bad, I'm sorry).

Spoiler! :
fuzzy brown furball
brought sunshine into my life
always by my side
turning sad tears into smiles
truly a woman's best friend

tall loving woman
beautiful and radiant
gives me love and joy
she will care until the end
truly a dog’s bestest friend





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Tue Aug 03, 2021 11:52 pm
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niteowl says...



Spoiler! :
At karaoke,
I thought I saw him, as if
He loved me enough to
Stay, as if he could know that
I was singing this for him.

She sang the song, sweet,
That hurts me when it plays-but
I’m the one who hurt
Us, leaving like a fool. Now
She sings, but never for me.
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle