ohmygoodness euph i love both of these poems so much! i love how short number 2 is. in those four lines, you're able to say so much with so little. your true artistry is really shining through this napo. i can't wait to read more!! <33
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
@LuxLuthor thank you, it's good to know it's worth the time looking for them! >.< @momonster AHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU! since poem 1 was so ~wordy~, i wanted to take on something small and meaningful for poem 2 - I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! and omg you flatter me too much, "true artistry", !!!!!! AHHHH I'M SOBBING THANK YOU THANK YOU <3333333
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
oh my gosh euph. just when i think your poetry can't get better, it does! i love everything about this poem. the lines in parentheses seem more personal and intimate, while the other lines seem more open and public. you're doing amazing; keep up the great work! <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
AYXBEUDBE WHERE YOU WRITING THIS IN MY THREAD WHILE I WAS WRITING IN YOURS??? AH! <3333 thank you so so much, and you got it bang on with the parentheses! I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying! <3
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
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Just wanted to stop by your thread to say how much I'm enjoying your poems this month, Euphory!! I especially love 4 and 5; 4 flows so well and has a great rhythm to it, and 5 just has beautiful language all around ("every law in the universe assumes" is such a wonderful line !!! just wow). Look forward to reading more! <3
i love how you take love and put it in such a dark point of view. not just the happy joyous parts of love, but the painful, hurtful parts as well. i think number 5 is my favorite so far. keep up the fantastic work! <3
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace. Romans 6:14 NIV
never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
@figmoon thank you so much! I usually struggle with getting the rhythm right most of the time, so hearing that makes me super happy! I'm glad to know you're enjoying <3 @momonster yeahh, love can be vicious sometimes. i'm so glad that got through (and also???? Your favorite?? AHHH what an honor !!! <3) thank you so so much! <3
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Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind
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