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There's such a comfortable, casual nostalgic feeling to poem 3 that seems like it just captures the essence of childhood - growing up and just being a kid hanging out with friends - I like the style you wrote it in too, with the frequent stanza breaks and colons - it sort of felt more like stilted reminiscing that way - like the thoughts were interrupting themselves as there was so much to remember. Looking forward to reading more! Keep up the terrific work! <3
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