Was going to quote the exact section Meshugenah commented on!! <3 Loving each of your poems, but something about #5 is particularly beautiful and haunting. The language in your poetry is just simply breathtaking; you manage to say so much so concisely, which is really an impressive skill. Absolutely love all the nature-themed poetry and can't wait to see more !!
Ooh. I really like the juxtaposition of the warm sun on cool skin in the first stanza. And then the description of the gentleness of the sun in the second.
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
The most important thing is to preserve the world we live in. Unless people understand and learn about our world, habitats, and animals, they won't understand that if we don't protect those habitats, we'll eventually destroy ourselves. — Jack Hanna
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