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Shoreline Delirium



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Shoreline Delirium
By Yoshikrab

[year 1]
Last edited by yoshi on Wed Apr 14, 2021 9:57 pm, edited 4 times in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Table of Contents

>prologue

>>our dreams

>>where is it? where are you?

>>the cracked conch

>>glorious

>>twister

>>what is a haiku?

>>the wandering birdwatcher

>>the five "w"s

>>staircase
Last edited by yoshi on Wed Apr 07, 2021 2:01 am, edited 12 times in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Thu Apr 01, 2021 1:27 am
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ρяσℓσgυє

in a sheltered cave
on a sheltered shore
my heart will crave
a little more

than brashly scavenging
for food and water
and harshly ravaging
for money and power

i'll open my eyes
to see the good
the cries, the sighs,
the would, the could

yes, in this sheltered cave
sheltered on this sheltered shore
my broken heart will greatly crave
for something with meaning, something more
Last edited by yoshi on Fri Apr 02, 2021 1:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Dossereana says...



Wow this is really good, I loved reading it. :D keep writing poetry you great at it.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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Last edited by yoshi on Sun Apr 04, 2021 12:45 am, edited 1 time in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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συя ∂яєαмѕ


five springs, six storms, two moons, one shout,
i'll break apart the world throughout

i'll crush the happy, wind-blown clouds
and smash the mighty mountain's shrouds

i'll send the world into devastation
i'll unite all evils within this nation

and even though i'm not team rocket
i'll see this through with my own eye socket

i'll force the havoc and terror around
i'll poison the ocean, break the ground

i'll feel the pain of those i've won
i'll rule them all just like the sun

someday, i'll do this, but not here
for today, i'm sleeping, soft and clear

we may have dreams, some good, some bad
but it's more important than sad
that there are some dreams that we've all had
Last edited by yoshi on Fri Apr 02, 2021 1:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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ωнєяє ιѕ ιт? ωнєяє αяє уσυ?


i'll yawn and stretch and reach around
for i'll lose something that i've once found

i'll jump up from my dusty bed
and leave the orders and notes unread

where is it?
where are you?
your escape cannot be true!

i'll wear my jacket, spin my hat
i'll move away from where i sat

no longer is this within my home
i'll have to search around, to roam

where is it?
where are you?
your escape cannot be true!
Last edited by yoshi on Fri Apr 02, 2021 1:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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тнє ¢яα¢кє∂ ¢σи¢н

i'll search the sand, the sea, the sky
but my failure makes me cry
my losses make me want to sigh
my terror makes me want to fly

i'll search the sea, the sky, the sand
but it'll never reach my hand
my thoughts'll be wonderful and grand
but they'll all be lost within the sand

ill search the sky, the sand, the sea
i'll make myself what i want to be
i'll search my soul, i'll set it free
but the lock just has no key

i'll search the evil, the hurt, the wrongs
"just show me what my heart so longs!"
my heart feels stabbed with many prongs
and laughed at, and by many throngs

at the end of the day, my search will end
for no one has the help to lend
i have no happy life, nor friend
just make this end, make this end!

but by the shore, i'll see a shell
a shell shaped like a golden bell
a shell, so hurt and broken, battered,
this cracked conch gives me smiles unshattered
Last edited by yoshi on Mon May 03, 2021 12:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sat Apr 03, 2021 6:51 pm
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gℓσяισυѕ

i found what i was searching for
how glorious is this day
my brain is foggy, arms are sore
thank god, is what i pray
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sat Apr 03, 2021 10:35 pm
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looseleaf says...



Five poems already? I’ve only done three. xD Anyways, congratulations on writing five poems and, I believe, earning a badge!

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тωιѕтєя


what is this joy i feel?
like the calm before a storm
what's this content i feel?
like the feeling before my heart is torn

i found it. finally
it's back in my hands
your respect for me is with me
i already know where it lands

but then the winds
 pick me up
  send me flying
   send me up
    i lose control
     i flap my arms
      i see the cities,
       roads, and farms
        it spins me through
         the vicious storms
          and laughs at me
           with wispy forms
            i slap at wind
             i scream at air
              it rips me up and
               tears my hair
            bring me down!
         i tell the beast
     the storm just laughs
   i am it's feast
       it sends me higher
            through the sky
                  i thought i
                  don't know how to fly
                    it breaks my soul
                      it shatters my heart
                       it reaps and chomps at
                             every part
                           i am resigned
                  i'll just give in
        but it isn't done
          the wind will win
                the sky is free
                   the clouds can see
                        the pain of me
                            and my sad plea
                       i want to flee
                  the ozone sea
                      but it just
                       can't ever be
                        i'm smashed around
                         by screeching squalls

                       until



                  the wind







 falls



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if you're subscribed to this thread, i apologize if you got quite a few notifications from here. i had a few *ahem* TECHNICAL difficulties with the formatting of this poem. But NEVERTHELESS i am done :)
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sun Apr 04, 2021 1:14 pm
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ωнαт ιѕ α нαιкυ?

what is a haiku?
truly just a string of words
woven perfectly
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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тнє ωαи∂єяιиg вιя∂ωαт¢нєя

slashing past the air
slicing through my heart
the sound of cheerful birds
all which who know their part

they know where they belong
they sing their every song
and unlike me, they know
which direction they should go
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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тнє fινє "ω"ѕ

where am i?
i ask myself
i am lost
within my thought

when will i leave?
i ask myself
i am trapped
within my pain

how will i lose?
i ask myself
i am maimed
within my guilt

why will i die?
i ask myself
i am killed
within my sorrow

who will i cry for?
i ask myself
no one
for no one cries for me
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Wed Apr 07, 2021 2:00 am
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ѕтαιя¢αѕє





i stop
   i look around
          there's no one here
                    nothing to be found

i jump
   what happened here?
              it's just dead grass
                        and musty fear

i scowl
    this isn't right
            i was brought here by a twister
                            right?

i turn
   i hear something
            calling to me
                    towards nothing

i gasp
   there's a staircase there
               it must be
                    someone's secret lair!

i step
   down the spooky stairs
               the quiet squeaks
                        raise my hairs

the stair

    begins to steep

            steeper and steeper

                      i have to leap

it gets so steep


        i have to crawl


                my sore feet slip


                        i nearly fall

i hear a voice




       calling to me




              from somewhere far




                         i can barely see

the stairs are gone










          it's just a hole









          but in the hole










          as black as coal









          i see something








          that clears my soul










          it's a bright, lit doorway










          and outside is a forest








          green, free, and whole
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  








It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind