Young Writers Society

Finally, April is here

the frost withers
under gentle touches.
of little horses

smiles of april
burn the milky winter light
good morning sun !

Love the imagery, Buranko! "frost withers" is shivery in a good way, and "burn the milky winter light" is such an intense picture! Great start to your NaPo

I booked some memories in
my notes; this job was for
the toothfairy and her
minions, not me

this; poem as
light as morning dew,
tight lipped, eyes shut,
giving it all for the
Light

Your second poem is interesting and mysterious. It makes me wonder how the speaker is connected to the toothfairy, and what those notes are about. I also really like the expressiveness of the third poem, it really feels to me like there's a sense of surrender in the 'poem's' expression.

You've got great succinctness + use of word-economy in these Buranko; I'd love to see some more! Your third poem was probably my favorite here - I think it can be so easy for a poem about a poem to turn into something very cliche but you did a nice job making the poem feel like a beautiful little moment unfolding as each line opened up; and the final line ending in just "Light" I thought was a good way to close it out. Good luck in future writing! <3