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Cause Us Emotional Pain



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Fri Jul 18, 2014 9:21 pm
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Contest says...



First I will introduce the people that will be assissting me with this contest: @RavenMoonStone (Raven), @Thewriter13 (Writer), @ContestPointPool (Cona).

Cona: So... This is called Cause Us Emotional Pain. It's purpose is to make us feel pain when we read your works.I

Raven: For example: when we say "cry", we mean, "Make us cry because the whole story is so emotional" Not, "Make us cry because the story is so bad, with the bad grammar and horrible plot." Got it? Good.

Writer: When we read your works, make your words stab us in the heart! I want to feel sorrow and suffering for the characters you develop, the plots you unfold, and the dialogue you construct.
When you start brainstorming for this short story, think of the saddest plot you could come up with. Sure it won't be Rue's death, but I'm sure you coulld come up with something even more emotional than that. :)
Make sure to use as many description as you can in order to create a more detailed, more sorrwful story.

Cona: The rules for the short stories are simple.
1. The short story has to be AT LEAST 500 words long, 2000 at the max. (Title does not count in the word count)
2. This CANNOT be fan fiction.
3. The story has to be written during the duration of the contest. Anything written before hand will not be accepted.
4. You can have up to THREE entries. However, each work has to have a different plot (So, you can have two poems and one short story, or two short stories and one poem. PLEASE NOTE: You can submit only one, if you would like. If you would like to submit only two, do so.)
5. This contest shall be up until August 1st.

Raven: Prizes for the short stories:
First Place: 1000 points, three reviews.
Second Place: 500 points, two reviews.
Third Place: 250 points, one review.
Runners up will each get a gift, donated by RavenMoonStone.
If you win, you can request reviews from Thewriter13, RavenMoonStone and ContestPointPool. Thewriter13 is good at descriptive short stories. RavenMoonStone is good at realistic dialogue. ContestPointPool is not good at reviewing, but, she can work on plot.

Writer: Poetry Guidelines:
1. Poems should be 150 words min, 200 max.
2. This cannot be based on fanfiction
3. Must contain at least 3 senses (sight, sound, smell, taste, hear)
4. The poem has to be written during the duration of the contest. Anything written before hand will not be accepted.
5.You can have up to THREE entries. However, each work must have a different topic.
6.This contest shall be up until August 1.
Prizes for the poems:
First Place: 1000 points, three reviews.
Second Place: 500 points, two reviews.
Third Place: 250 points, one review.
Runners up will each get a gift, donated by RavenMoonStone.
Thewriter13 is the only one who can review poetry at the moment.

If you wish to help us review these works after they are posted, go to the club. :)

Raven, Cona, Writer: The club for the contest: clubs/1977
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My last pride and joy: R.E.D.
  





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Sat Jul 19, 2014 4:21 pm
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IamTraunt says...



*dances*
TWO SHORT STORIES HERE I COME!
I am going to make you cry. I promise you that. Also, hi ContestPointPool, I don't think we've met.
Hey, Thewriter13, RavenMoonStone! *grins* Ready to cry?
I LOVE SHORT STORIES!
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Make sure you're perfect.


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Sat Jul 19, 2014 7:10 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Here is my first emotive story:
My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer

Enjoy. Its a little sad. The next one will be a real tear jerker. I promise ;)
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Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:55 pm
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Cithara says...



@IamTraunt thanks! I'll look at it now :D
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


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Sun Jul 20, 2014 9:20 am
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IamTraunt says...



Another one for you guys to read.
The Silent Game

Also, I'm going to India on the 1st of August - so I wont get to see who wins D-:
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Sun Jul 20, 2014 12:50 pm
Cithara says...



Thanks! And awwww no!! Well have fun in India and we will still let you know ;)
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 3:35 pm
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IamTraunt says...



I know :( And thanks! I will do. (They probably will have internet connection)
Your welcome.
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Thu Jul 24, 2014 2:20 pm
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rhiasofia says...



I wrote you a poem

I might try to write two other submissions, but only if inspiration strikes.

What Alex Said
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Thu Jul 24, 2014 2:34 pm
Cithara says...



Thanks @rhiasofia :D
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Mon Jul 28, 2014 3:29 pm
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Kelpies says...



Hope it's not too late.

Death and Destruction.
We are who we are, and if someone has a problem with that; that's their problem not ours.
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Mon Jul 28, 2014 4:06 pm
Cithara says...



Never too late XD Deadline is august 1st. thank you for participating! If you can recruit more people to join, that would be awesome!
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Tue Jul 29, 2014 11:52 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



*sniff* Why must the Poetry max. be so low.
[insert really cool and fun quote here]
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Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:12 pm
Cithara says...



Well....we can expand it. I didn't think anyone would exceed the Max XD
go ahead, enter "Little Girl" ;)
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Tue Jul 29, 2014 11:00 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



It may not be emotionally depressing, but it still is touching.
Little Girl
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Tue Jul 29, 2014 11:30 pm
Cithara says...



Thanks Wolf! :)
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  








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