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Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:04 pm
PixieStix says...



In this game the perspective is to conplain and then the next person make it better. The person that is replying has to rate the points. Put how many points they earned.

Heres an example.

conplain:I hate these fries, I can't even taste them!

Reply: Rate number( number of points.)=10/ Ok, I'll re-make them for you.
Oh, This frier is too rusty!

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Then you keep going.I'll start us off,

This bike is too pink!

Your turn.Remember to rate my conplain in a scale from one to ten. Then write your own conplaint, then the next person does the same thing.Have fun!
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:41 pm
PixieStix says...



Points rate: 7/ ok i will repaint it for you,

This paint is to dry!!!
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 12:50 am
Justagirl says...



Points rate: 8/Ok I'll get you some new paint!

OH NOES! The paint store was closed because Godzilla just ran over it!!!!! :shock:
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:53 am
Jennya says...



points: 10
Okay, I will kill Godzilla with my magic powers and get you some paint.

Godzilla's corpse fell and squashed my sister! :O
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Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:16 pm
PixieStix says...



points rate: 9 percent

Ok I will rush your sister to the hospital and get her some extra working medicine to make her feel better, and not squashed anymore!

Shoot, The Hospitals closed! :(




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Fri Jul 01, 2011 9:31 pm
Liv says...



OK, I will get my doctor father to make her all better!

Oh, shoot, my father was squished by a razor blade!




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Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:43 pm
PixieStix says...



Points rate: 5 percent

I will take my wand and unsquish him and make Jennya's sister better!

Aww man! I cant find it!
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Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:21 pm
PixieStix says...



points rate:/ 7

My mom is a Cleaner lady so then she can clean your house then you can find your wand!

My mom is off duty today!
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Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:22 pm
PixieStix says...



rates points:/ 10

I will get her to work no matter what!

Shes too lazy!
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Mon Jul 25, 2011 7:06 pm
Justagirl says...



3/10

I'll zap her to get her going :twisted: !


Oh no! My electric-gun(-thingy) is not working! It was eaten by my kangaroo!
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Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:20 pm
Cailey says...



9
I will give your kangaroo medicine to make him puke up the gun.

Oops, my giraffe ate all the medicine and it now dying. :(
Sometimes, the only thing that's left to do is sit down with an empty notebook and I pen that leaks ink all over your fingers. Then, close your mind and let a thousand characters write their story...

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Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:20 pm
SophiaBurnette says...



8/10
I'll ask my zoo-vet cousin if she can do anything.
Oh noes! :shock: She's leaving for Peru today!
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Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:03 pm
shadowraiki says...



6/10; Fortunately there was a plane delay (oh wait, that's actually real life) so you managed to catch her before she left.

There was a 56 car pile up, a leaking gas tanker, and a high speed car chase blocking you and the airport.
If words are just letters put together, why do we decide on what they mean?

I step away from the grammar to review the story.

I don't do poetry.




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Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:17 pm
Justagirl says...



9/10
Don't worry, we can just use my lime green helicopter to fly over it all!

Darn - I forgot that my pet rabbit ate my helicopter!
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Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:45 pm
PrincessOfDarkness says...



9/10

Don't worry- I have my own plane.

I forgot- it got lost in the Bermuda Triangle when I loaned it to Flight 19! :O!
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