zelithon wrote:OK you... people?
You hardly qualify as people.
Spelling has nothing at all to do with intellect NOTHING. Also I was in a hurry. Can you point out what is wrong? My grammar I could easily fix but i feel lack of grammar is very interesting sometimes. I was not the one who brought up money anyway; I don't think bragging about wealth when you are still a kid is reasonably.
*drools* You want me to critique it???????????????????????????? AWESOME!
Ok i just have to say cause this is the most easy thing to brag about: I live in the most elite part of California so close to the beach i can here it at night. In a huge house with enough bedrooms for all of us (six) to have our own room. It is worth over 2 million $'s. My dog if even worth alot. She is purebred and 1ooo $s. My dad is the boss at his successful firm (attorneys). I repeat HUGE house. And my parents own two other million dollar houses to be rent out.
I would have preferred to not have brought this into the battle but oh well.
I would write it as this:
Okay, I just have to say since this is the most easy thing to brag about. I live in the most elite part of California. I am so close to the beach I can hear it at night. And I don't live in a shack; I live in a huge house with enough bedrooms for all of us (six) to have our own room. It is worth over 2 million dollars. My dog is even worth a lot. She is purebred and worth a thousand dollars, at least. My dad is the boss at his successful firm (attorneys). I repeat HUGE house. And my parents own two other million dollar houses to be rent out.
I would have preferred to not have brought this into the battle but oh well.
And... I have to ask. What part of California? Around Carmel or something? That area of California is so beautiful! Can you recommend me any good restaurants over there? I go there fairly frequently for a northern California-er.
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